tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2439951771912954397.post4431946199999845960..comments2012-05-20T03:18:24.284-07:00Comments on Poor Girl, Rich Girl (Allison's blog novel): Chapter 6 - MilliJeanniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15590153368194137758noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2439951771912954397.post-68675257123381753032012-05-20T03:18:24.284-07:002012-05-20T03:18:24.284-07:00Hi Allison, I have been reading this today and I d...Hi Allison, I have been reading this today and I don't want to stop. I care about the girls and about their plan to rebuild the shelter. You have created two very real characters and it is an exciting story.<br />I wonder too how Rachel's family are getting along.<br />Well done. Love, SarahAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02101282043723131029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2439951771912954397.post-55456277369286166712012-01-22T18:13:47.233-08:002012-01-22T18:13:47.233-08:00Allison, I'm impressed with the dialogue secti...Allison, I'm impressed with the dialogue sections. The conversation between the girls flows very naturally - not stilted at all. You have also included some beautiful images - like your description of the snow angels. Very nicely done! MaureenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com